I think the bear would need more armor, especially around the face. The chick looks pretty good though! Especially the I-stap-you-bitch-in-the-heart part of armor is really handy, for the enemy. And why doesnt she wear gloves? It's like she couldn't finish her dress up.
I love your art, but... Why must women in art always have some sort of hole or awkward piece of armour that points out they're a woman or allows straight-men viewers to ogle? There's been plenty of real women warriors in the past to show that they wore basically the same armour as men. Even having a cleavage line on that breastplate would have left it weak and liable to crack there. Even her pose is suggestive. Women are fully able to wear full armour and do power poses.
well the thing is this is just what the client wanted to i went with it. I dont really care what woman are depicted wearing in any situation given the genre, men are depicted equally the same way wearing impractical armor, shirtless and over muscled, striking masculine poses especially in the realm of fantasy. This is not a one sided problem and will never go away.